Zonsezi - m'dziko kwathu!

Zonsezi - m'dziko kwathu!

Lingaliro la Mama ndi m'zigawozigawo mu T.Travnika ndakatulo monga wolemba ndakatulo yekha. Mu ndakatuloyi "kwawo" Terentiy Ras kryvaet Kuvuta ichi ndi layering a "dere-Vienna mpanda" ndi "kwake ndi denga zadranennoyu" pamaso "Ki-wa Uzani ndi mkanjo", "maula ndi bludgeon" - "zonsezi ndi Mama wanga ". Mfundo imeneyi umaposa chisanadze zeni Russia aforesaid malire:

More kuti: ku Sun - lachitatu,
Ndi maudindo mu makalata asanu - Earth,
Wachisanu ndi chimodzi wa dziko -
Zonsezi - Mama wanga!

Kuyambira tsikulo a ndakatulo iyi:

"Kodi kuyamba dziko?" - mmene funso woona ndi zofunika, zomwe mawu abwino, zomwe sizodabwitsa-tsa nyimbo! Ndipo, kwenikweni, pamene iye akuyamba Xia? Funso aliyense wa ife ndi yankho - aliyense wa ife ... ine, kutembenukira ku ntchito zawo ku phunziro ili, mwinamwake monga wina, m'pofunika Pony mayi. Kodi ndinena mawu awa, osati maulendo awo kapena munthawi ya zosangalatsa kwaokha, komanso ena limaonetseratu vuto lililonse, maganizo. Kodi mayankho ambiri ndinali kwambiri yomweyo bwino soni anali ndinaika mayankho funso lofunika kwambiri ili, ndipo zonse zinaoneka woona, onse oyenerera, onse otve-aspirants, koma osati kwathunthu. Pa zifukwa zina wakhala boma moyo, imene anandiuza kuti tiyenera kuganiza tiyenera kumvetsa chinachake. Ine sindikudziwa momwe kufotokoza izo, koma mwanjira ndinazindikira kuti yankho, likukhalira, funso langa ichi aliyense wa usinkhu wanga pang'ono osiyana, mwina wodzilemekeza ndi watsopano zopezeka ndi zaka zambiri, icho chimasintha. Chinachake nthawi zonse, koma chinachake umayamba, koma kumadera a mawu a Mama akadali mwawo. Choncho onse ndi ofanana kuyamba kwawo? Ndi "Chithunzi mu phunziroli wanu", ndi mabwenzi abwino, ndi nyimbo ya mayi anga ... kapena zinthu zonsezi mwakamodzi, ndipo ndi chinachake chosiyana kwambiri, weniweni? ..
Yesani kuyankha funso limeneli. Ndikukutsimikizirani, kudzakhala kovuta, zovuta. Ziri ngati kuti pa vetit anaukira nkhani kuposa inu Mwachitsanzo, kanthu, ubwenzi, chikhulupiriro, chimwemwe, chikondi ... Koma funso tsopano si za izo, tsopano za dziko lawo: nyumba, banja, dziko .. mwina pa nthaka kapena lapansi .. mwina dziko lapansi, koma kuluza la kudzikolakwathu, chifukwa funso adawomba njira kuti: chifukwa pa Chin kwawo? Ine chisanu ... tilingalire, mvetserani akusuzumira, kuyang'ana, kufunafuna yankho ... tanthauzo la vesi kulembedwa LONSE, awo, munthu wina, zochuluka za izi ndipo ambiri ndi otve-wabweletsela. Choncho chifukwa chake ndi kovuta funso limeneli? Mwinamwake chifukwa inu muli pano, inu muli mu dziko lakwathu, inu muli mu chikondi izo, inu muli pa chiyambi? ..
Emigration, kusungulumwa ... I anafunsa anzake, Pokey-nuvshih kwawo, "kuziika" monga iwo amadzitcha-vayut. Anafunsa, ndipo ndidayankha, anayankha bwinobwino ndi zambiri zofanana ndi zimene zinachitika mu mayankho awo, nayankha, kukumbukira ndili mwana woyamba zidindo omveka ubwana: Mayi, bambo, kumbuyo, sukulu, masewera ... ndi zonse ali ana. Izi kawirikawiri mpikisano nthano zinatha mwadzidzidzi, koma zinaonekeratu kuti Mama akuyamba ndi chinthu chofunika kwambiri mwana. Kapena mwinamwake iye ali, ndi kumayamba? Ndi zonse zimene zikuchitika kwa ife pa Semu ana?
Ndiyeno ine, ine ndikumudziwa zonse mwadzidzidzi, monga kudzoza kwa ine kumvetsa uku, ine ndamva kuti si mwana chabe, ndipo yoyamba zimachitika - monga mwana. Kodi zimenezo kwenikweni koyamba, msonkhano woyamba wa miyoyo ana lotseguka, ndi miyoyo ya sanali kusokoneza-zhennoy akulamulira akula, misonkhano yake ndipo ndi chinachake chimene kuyamba ndi aliyense wa ife ali lake po-akusokosera? Ngati ndi choncho, ndiye lililonse lachimwemwe, lowala, wodzala ndi maganizo angwiro ubwana kukumbukira ndi kwapang'onopang'ono, chiyambi, kapena m'malo imodzi mwa mfundo zofunika kwambiri chomwe pambuyo kwambiri kuphatikiza pamodzi ndi mtundu uliwonse wa ife wokongola, lonse mtsinje, zomwe ife kuitana kwawo ndipo kuti tidzakhala mu madzi ake a moyo ... Mwina ndicho chifukwa zimenezi ndi zofunika kwambiri, kawirikawiri anafunsa-funso Vai woganiza moyo. Tsopano ndinena mu njira ina: pati ... inu? Si kwawo? A kwawo, lakwanu? Kodi ... ngati mwanayo?

chilimwe 2004

Modabwitsa ndi chikondi chenicheni kwa dziko wolemba ndakatulo akuonetsera mkulu yapachiweniweni udindo pa ubale-NIJ zonse zikuchitika mu Russia, kunyezimiritsa zilandiridwenso nthawi m'nthawi imeneyo. "Ikuthamangira" zaka za 90s oyambirira a zaka za m'ma XX, pamene boma la Soviet Union linagwa, ululu wake onse ndi chisokonezo banditry, kuzungulira dziko ndi mutu pamene "malire lotseguka" ndi mtsinje zauve adakhuthuka chitayiko zoipa ndi kulekerera T.Travnik anafotokoza mu ndakatuloyi, zinalembedwa zaka ziwiri dtsat zisanu ndi ziwiri. Kenako, ndakatulo iyi anatchuka kwambiri nyimbo "Vladimirka" Nthawi zambiri anaphedwa lero ndi oimba achinyamata ndi bards, ndi monga chikondi telyami ndakatulo nyimbo. Mukuwerenga za nthawi imeneyo, amayesetsa zaka ziwiri zapitazo ndipo mosadziwa agwera mu nthawi-mosferu masiku amenewo kumene "tsiku ndi Khristu wopachikidwa-naetsya kachiwiri", kumene zinthu zonse kuwagula ndi kuwagulitsa, "lita imodzi ya mowa wamphamvu - awiri" catty "ndi moyo - kapena shisha ". zilowerere nthawi conv-tilis mu nthawi kumwa - "M'mawa kumwa, musanze tsiku, bwino, osachepera mu manja a mphete, ndi pansi miyala -. mwazi" Ndipo yekha "wogontha belu Ringer, kukhala chilankhulo ... mu kulira co-lokolnom anaganiza afe, toera chilled Lazaro konzekera imfa yake." Zowawa Werengani mizere anakamba kuti "Lapotnikov Russian fuko lomveka ndi nkhwangwa":

Hei, Lapotnikov Russian fuko lomveka ndi nkhwangwa
Ndi moyo chopanda malire, koma pakamwa darned -
Near Smolensk - kuberedwa, anapha pafupi Ryazan
Ndipo mu dzenje analephera pansi woledzera kugona mtanda.

Kodi iye, mnyamata Travnik? Momwe kuvomerezera wake Mo-lodaya moyo moyo? Masiku amenewo, wolemba ndakatulo konse adagawana ndi GI-ma CD. Iwo anali mazana a nyimbo olembedwa. Monga Iye anati Travnik "... sindinkafuna kulemba ndakatulo, ndi onse anapereka mphamvu ya Mu-stacking malirime. Ndipo ine ndinati - sanalembe ndakatulo ndi nyimbo. Ine kulemba mawu ndipo ndimawamva kuimba ngati oganiza Melo-di-. Osati ndakatulo onse adayimba, kapena kukhala yeniyeni, mu nyimbo zake lamkati la ndakatulo ndiponso kuti ikuimbidwa, ndiye m'kupita kwanthawi amakhala nyimbo. Ngati mutangogwada m'manja a Wolemba luso, izo zidzakhala zodabwitsa, ndipo ngakhale kwambiri galu izo. Ndipo ngati panali nyimbo, ndakatulo monga mogometsa kusiyiratu. Yesani ndi kuwerenga nyimbo pambuyo-anamva ndakatulo ntchito Vladi-World Vysotsky, chabwino, mwachitsanzo, "Ngati mnzanu likukhalira kuti ..." kapena tchulani nyimbo Andrei Makarevich. Kodi singsong. Izo sizikumveka ndakatulo kale, koma ... ali adayimba. Apa pali chimene chimachitika pa moyo wa ndakatulo, wobadwa kwa NE-sen. Zambiri kubadwanso luso mawu, koma panali okha mavesi ndi ndakatulo. Iwo sitiyimba nyimbo, kuimba - pakuti prescheno, iwo akhoza kutchulidwa ndi izi ndi cholinga awo apamwamba - zikhale umene mi ".
Mu 1994 T.Travnik analemba wake "Kalata Mama", "popanda moto, popanda ululu, ong'ambika, koma mawanga, pa nthaka ya gor-gehena lagona pa mitundu ya m'mbuyomu." Ndipo "si zosangalatsa kwa ine" - woyamba vorit ndakatulo ya "misika mzimu" ndi "fairs wamasiye", pamene Russia anatembenuza dziko mmalo mwa "chuma msika" mu msika mosalekeza ndi anthu ambiri, makamaka m'badwo wa 50-60 sanali tsogolo - anakomoka chisanadze alandile makumi makumi anai m'mayiko: akatswiri, aphunzitsi, madokotala - anakakamizika malonda kuti apulumuke. Wolemba ndakatulo anati zimene anaona:

Memory isklovana onse, gulu la kubedwa,
Ndipo pa chilichonse belfries Ndikuganizira kuti akubuula.
Russia ndi kutsanzikana wanga, nyimbo zanga chisoni ...
N'chifukwa chiyani ndinakhala mlendo, kumene iye anabadwa?


Mu ndakatulo ambiri a 90 ntchentche wa XX atumwi, mu nthawi ya kusintha chikhalidwe ndi mbiri yakale, 'Anga pamaso alipo chifaniziro cha ndakatulo-nzika kusonyeza mizere wake ndakatulo zokhudza zimene zikuchitika. Mu ndakatulo "Tin Asilikali", "kuti nkhondo Chechnya," wolemba ndakatulo akufotokoza poyera mtima wake kwa m'deralo con-flicts, nkhondo ndi mavuto awo, anazunza pamene ros-UIS. Mu ndakatulo "Lazaro", wolembedwa mu October 1993, wolemba ndakatulo, molondola Ndikuuzani zinkakhalira zaka ajawo, anena luso Russian anthu kutsitsimutsa:

Ndipo anthu mu Russia, monga udzu, kutchetcha osachepera,
Tangotsimikizani kukula - adzazindikira n'kukhululuka.

"Anafa pansi" ikuthamangira nineties, koma kachiwiri "chimapwetekanso moyo umenewo kupweteka moyo kuti pali tsopano" - mawu awa a nineties ndi kuugwiritsa ntchito kwa masiku ano Russia. dziko lasintha, anasintha, ndipo ife - anali wabwino, koma ululu ndi nkhawa tsogolo la Liu bimoy dziko ndi mapeto a anthu adabvutika moyo wa ndakatulo ndi anatsanulira mu mizere wake wotchuka, amene pambuyo pake kuzitchula anthu ambiri nkhani chikumbumtima dziko, ndipo zna-wakunyengeza ndipo wathu ndi inu:

Dziko silingayende imfa
Kodi palibe ubwana ndi ukalamba osauka.

Mu mizere iwiri kufotokoza zinthu zenizeni lonse la moyo imeneyi dnyashney Russia: zosathandiza penshioni umene anthu akale "adzapulumuka" ndi chimodzimodzi ankamvetsa wovuta ana ndi umoyo-kusatetezeka kwa akatswiri achinyamata ndi anthu pafupi zaka zopuma pantchito. Wosweka zaka bungwe kulowezana kwa mibadwo. Koma ana ngokhoza amafuna chisamaliro cha makolo awo, ndi makolo awo oche yofiira akufunika zinachitikira moyo ndi nzeru za anthu achikulire. Pakuika ana lero nye mfundo wosatha wa chikondi ndi kuika mu miyoyo yawo maziko a zinthu zauzimu, zamakhalidwe abwino komanso mayiko-soni, poyamba Russian miyambo, Kukhazikitsa mkulu Chuv-soni wakutemwa dziko lawo - boma invests ku tsogolo la Russia. Kunyalanyaza zosowa za anthu okalamba, ife afooketse mizu, kuiwala kuti mizu ya mtengowo ndi kupereka moyo zonse. Kufota, kufa mizu - wamwalira ndi mtengo lonse. Ivan Andreevich Krylov wolemba Chirasha thambo ndi fabulist (1769-1844) anapereka fano lalikulu la nkhumba, amene regaling zipatso zokwana, mindlessly pansi-Zimalepheretsa mizu ya mtengowo kuti: "atazolowera zipatso zokwana, mizu ndi sitifunanso ...". Mu ndakatulo "Yophukira - kasupe ...", ngakhale dzina la ndakatulo imeneyi - wofunika T.Travnik limanena kuti "golide zikutanthauza" monga kumeneko,

Kodi pali mwayi mu moyo
Fufuzani nokha mu kulemekeza
Ndi kudzoza kuyamba.

Ndipo komabe, zomvetsa chisoni kuti, kuyenda m'misewu ya Russia, wolemba ndakatulo ndi GRU Stu anati: "Ndinaphunzira chisoni kwambiri pamsewu, akuyankhula kwa moyo ndi pafupi" ndi "anaphunzira kwambiri misozi kuwawa, ziyembekezo ndi chiyembekezo chopanda kanthu."
Monga ndakatulo-nzika, T.Travniku amakonda Chuv-soni udindo mkulu owerenga ake, anthu ake. "Ndipo ngati ine kuchokera, choncho yang'anani -narodny ine"! Mu mizere ake a ndakatulo lagona tira-Kai ndi mphamvu wamphongo, kulimba akutuluka malangizo koyenela, wopanda mkulu sanakhulupirike kuchita, zampingo kusankha. Mu ndakatulo "Russia, inu wosalakwa-ta" molimba mtima, ndi mkwiyo, ananena kuti masiku ano Russia "nesmyshlon kuno chachisanu, aliyense tre-Rd malonda" ndi akufunsa funso: "Ndani anaika pa amayika izi maliseche angwiro "? Mu ndakatulo imeneyi buku Valenod aliyense mzere ndi zogwirizana ndi tanthauzo masiku ano Russian. Nkhawa za tsogolo la ndakatulo a mbadwo wake, pa mtundu ndi Mama. Mwanjira wapadera phokoso owawa umayamba ndi awa "buzzwords" kuti ndakatulo konse ali-ntchito ntchito yake, koma pano poyera kuti iwo anali ngati kulira monga akulturny grotesque monga chamanyazi national:

Amene asinthane iwe, Russia,
Kuti "Oo, chimasonyeza ndi mlungu"?
ana anu? Ndipo zowonadi, ngati ana?
Amene anayigwira kamphindi,

Ndipo mkulu wa kuluma mu thupi ili,
Amene ali masitolo panopa zambiri,
chakuti makolo athu ofunika -
Moyo wa anthu ulemu ndi manyazi.

Ndi angati mkwiyo wolungama ndi ululu kuika ndakatulo ka-zhdoe mawu a ndakatulo imeneyi, kukumbutsa ency wake - kuzizira pa kasungidwe wapatali "moyo wa anthu", iye "ulemu ndi manyazi." "Chikumbumtima, otchuka ndi Ukoma - apa, asilikali loyera" - mawu awa a Russian mu izi, woimba-akulemba nyimbo Bulat Okudzhava (1924-1997), linalembedwa mu 1988 ndipo panopa bwinobwino ngati foloko khalidwe aboma.
Iwo sangakhoze kukhala opanda chidwi ndi ndakatulo ndi clogging chinenero Russian mu catchwords osiyana ena ndi wosanjikiza-inu-majeremusi. Mu "Analytical nkhani dzina inu nditagona" T.Travnik publicist analemba kuti: "Language ndi chizindikiro changwiro cha mkhalidwe wathu, moyo wathu wa maganizo. Iwo coarsens moyo, opunduka ndi chinenero chathu akusowa, timatha kuzindikira, kumvetsa ndi kudziwa. Language chikhalidwe, kumvetsetsa za mawu, chuma, kukhala ndi udindo mu wokha pamwamba - pali mtsogoleri moyo wathu, m'njira zambiri zidzadalira - kaya kupita kukula kwathu blagoob mosiyana ndi mgwirizano pamfundo, Akatichotsera kwa ena zana ndi Ron pamapeto amapeza ndi chonyansa, wosakongola mawonekedwe. chinenero chathu ndi osauka, ndipo ife kutaya kumverera kwa nthawi kwambiri, ndi bwino akufuna athu syllable waukali ndiponso wosazindikira. "
Mawu vuto-namsongole Russian ndakatulo-oyera mtima a mkombero lonse ya maphunziro ndakatulo 'chinenero hRUStSKOGO "kumene Travnik ndi Izitu n'zovutitsa chisoni amachititsa maphunziro za mawu amene akhoza kuononga Chirasha. Ndipo lero Mo-ngo phunziro ili si pa, chifukwa kukayenda mokwanira pa Semu lotanthauzira mawu ndi ziganizo: "Tipo asanaganize mmene kumva", "corpus, darting pansi mphuno zathu," Chabwino, "co-Thoroe imaimira chachibadwidwe "inde"; ndi m'malo mwa "zimene" anaponyedwa mwa theka akumugwira milomo "Suntuke", "FAQ". M'nkhani yomweyo T.Travnik akufotokoza mfundo "kuti limaonetseratu, leaner ndipo kuposa chilankhulidwe cha anthu, m'pamenenso umatha kukhala yake ngati malo chikhalidwe, ndi ozindikira." Kuchokera pa mfundo imeneyi, chuma kuteteza ndi chizindikiro cha chinenero wamphamvu Russian, mawu ake, wolemba ndakatulo mawu ake ndi mtetezi wa kukongola ndi kukwaniritsa chinenero, kupewa chipongwe kwa iye, kulankhula ndi owerenga chanu, mu zimene ophatikizidwa mfundo mfundo wosatha wa ubwino ndi chikondi. Ndi mkulu wa mizimu-tsa mawu Russian ndi mlatho, amene Co-kugwirizanitsa ife ku dziko la mapiri ndi kumabweretsa "kuphunzira Chirasha kumwamba nyenyezi ndiye zosavuta." Inde, Chirasha chizindikiro mawu - wapadera ndi Travnik akudziwa kuti izi ndi anatituma ife chidutswa cha chidziwitso cha izi:

Kodi sangafanane, sangafanane
Russkoyazychie mu ndime.
Ndi kanthu kwa aliyense, koma ndi palokha
Izo zikanati kupikisana ndikanathera.

Zonse ladzala ndi chikondi,
Chikondi ndi kuteteza!

Kodi wathunthu ndi amphamvu awiri kuwamaliza mzere! Kodi wokongola ndi ndakatulo momveka kupuma mizere! Mwa iwo ndakatulo kuwulula zinsinsi za mphamvu yauzimu mawu Russian: lodzala ndi chikondi - ichi ndi chinsinsi choyamba, koma chinsinsi chakuti mawu Russian si wodzala chikondi, ndi - "chikondi ndi kutetezedwa." M'choonadi Mkhristu kuti Mulungu - ndi chikondi, ndipo, kuwerenga mizere iyi ndi ntchito njira hermeneutic, limasonyeza kwambiri mumtima tanthauzo la mawu awa: "Onse amene ntchito-Neno Mulungu . Kuteteza" Mwamsanga pambuyo mizere iyi, ena: Mulungu kusungidwa Russia - mtima cha Orthodox, dziko ku nthawi makedzana kasungidwe Orthodox chikhulupiriro mwa Mulungu ndi zamoyo monga mwa Uthenga malamulo. lingaliro Devel-wai a kutali kumbali iyi, kutsegula ndi Dru-goy, tanthauzo lenileni - mu woyeretsedwa asaipitsidwe ndi mtima wa munthu, Mulungu alowa ndi amadzadza mitima ya zosangalatsa kupotokola ndi chikondi ichi ndi kuteteza anthu ku mavuto Napas-Ana mu moyo padziko lapansi. Ndicho chimene mtundu wa chidziwitso watiululira T.Travnik mu lalikulu mkati tanthauzo la mizere iwiri! Anthu pa-zimaonekeratu mmene chuma ndi mphamvu ya mawu Russian.